Last night you made me question if you really care
you just left me sitting there
by myself and alone
leaving my heart heavy as a stone
You ditched me for that dude time after time
made me feel like fuckin slime
Made me feel like I wasn't worth it
Left me there just to sit
I found out who really cares
did you really expect me to sit there lonely in despair
I know you may not be comfortable with our friendship
But sorry I'm not letting our friendship slip
She is my best friend and has my full trust
So don't look at her with any disgust
Shes my best friend so your gonna have to deal
Don't worry shes not going to try to steal
She was there last night
When you weren't in sight
How am I supposed to feel like you care
When your never there
Author notes
kind of short, just had to let it out
A contest entry
- Give Me Your Heart by SchizoChic.
600 points, ended March 20, 2008, 19 entries
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Honey, if this person is never there, chances are they don't care. Stick with the friendships that are worth while. Good luck in the contest.
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Feels like there should be something more.... but what you have is good content.
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get the feeling ur talking about kenny the fagggg?
yea hes a jerkk.
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This was really good Tim. I could feel the emotion in it. Excellent job.
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ehh, so i heard the pasta dinner didnt go so well.
guess you were right to be paranoid.
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yeaa just alil pissed because aly completly ignored Sam. But w/e, jus confusedd
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