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A Friend Like You (Rewrite)

Beauty only goes skin deep.

I wonder how you can ever sleep?

Hurting the ones you ‘love’

When things aren’t the way they once was.

You said you wanted me to love you,

Well I did,

You said you wanted me to care,

Well I did,

You said you wanted me to trust you,
And not think that you’re a skanky whore.

Well I did!

I was stupid for trusting you, for loving you,

For being thankful you were my friend.

You plunged your knife deep in my back and twisted it around with all your might,

As I slowly died into the black of night,

You said that you were sorry, you just weren’t happy that things just weren't the same.

Well then what gave you the right to destroy the little happiness that I FINALLY found in my life?

What gave you the right to make me cry, and wishing, and hoping, and praying that soon I would just die.

I will not bash you like you bash me, I will not betray you like you betrayed me.

I only have one thing to say, Keep your words to yourself.


Get it through your thick head, that I want nothing more to do with you.

You stole the one person that made my life a little more bearable,

And you called yourself my friend,

In the end it's clear your true colors came through, and I hate myself for ever trusting you.

Getting off on other peoples pain, what do you have to gain?

NOTHING! That is what you will get from me from now on.

No sympathy, or rage, not even a little bit of pain.

So get over yourself, and stop trying to fill me with self-doubt.

I’m stronger then you, though you never knew.

Well guess what little girl? All I’ve got to say, is I hope you find a friend that will betray you the way you played me.

YOU KNEW what he meant to me, you knew how much I cared,

How could you go behind my back and make him fall in love with you?

You're a coward you can't even face me and tell me it was

But I do know it's true when I say, who needs enemies with a friend like you?

Author notes

This is to the friend that doesn't have the guts to tell me that she's the reason the first guy that I've felt anything for in almost 2 years left me. I'm not sure who she is yet, but I hope when she reads this she'll realise just how much of a bitch she truly is.

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  • SweetAngel122989
    March 10, 2008

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    damn! I hate it when people think that stealing is right in any sense of it. What did the guy have to say bout it? And he didnt tell you who she is? WHAT THE FLIP? Oh well this was a great poem. I've missed ya!

    Crystal