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A Final Goodbye

I feel like you're not giving anything
While I'm giving all of me to you-
And you're making me cry,
You're making me hurt...
I'm not sure if our love is true.

There are problems and holes in most friendships
But usually both sides with try
To fix up the fight-
To bring it into light...
But I don't think you're trying at all.

If you think you can take me for granted
Then you're wrong, so wrong about me
I won't put up-
I won't stand
This treatment- so let me be.

You blew it, okay? So don't come back
I haven't got anything else to say.
We're over
We're gone
And I'm sure,
I'll belong
Somewhere else...
With somebody else...

You might not see from where you stand,
But I'm slowly falling apart
Crying so softly
Calling your name
I don't like you like I did at the start.

So please, don't bother me any more
I can't bear to see your face
I'll fall apart,
If I stay like this
So I'll help you out the door.

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  • Fey Absinthe
    March 10, 2008

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    It's so sad...the words rip into my heart and try to stitch the peices back together again....I love it...it reminds me of when I was still infatuated with that boy...I love this peice