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Messenger

fuelled by an awesome drive,
my binary brain blocks tasteless memories

new windows await

as I control and monitor
my outlook on life

the Scroll manages my every task

as I

upwardly shift


Author notes

Infused with computerized jargon, the poem plays on the role of a spam blocker to allude to my computer's quest for righteousness. Hope you enjoy the fresh take on the prompt.

The title, in my estimation seems appropriate because the computer is the actual protagonist in the poem... so in literal terms, the pc is the messenger.

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  • lilAj
    April 23, 2008

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    why me neva se this?? i think it fits the prompt perfectly, I liked how you ended it!
    yeah....... lol
    you must have swalloed one lol