What did you do?
Did you cast a love spell on me?
I can't breathe without feeling sprung
My eyes dance
Your words carry me away
I feel like I am floating in an abyss
I feel like dancing
round and round
I am floating higher and higher
No matter what you do
or say;
I am STILL sprung!
Ill fly with the birds fluttering
singing in the trees;
I want to float away
Dreams surround around this feeling
With fantasy and bubbles...
What do I do?
where do I go?
Nowhere
This is an emotional high
feeling drunk with no alcohol
I am still floating
way up into the sky
I am not drowning
I would be but
not as long as I am sprung...
All the happiness you give me
just by being my friend
Can you see it?
I feel yet lighter
Ill just lie here
or maybe Ill walk on the waters
no no no
Ill float
Cause I STILL feel very sprung!
Author notes
Type 1- Affection
A contest entry
- Types Of Love(NEED TYPE 1 BEFORE JUDGING) by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended March 31, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank God, someone did type one.
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Wel it was almost Sprug over here till 16 inches of snow
fell from who knows where in the HELL-O from 16 is the low spots 24 and up to36 at end of drive way laugh darn you I'll get your address and send you some COD how does this grab one the record was 21 inches. i had to go to the dict. and I was sure to start off. that was till the white stuff started flaking off. Icicles over 48 inches lond almost like those things in caves where the meet in the middle. Stlag- mights and stlag- tights they were over 50inches across the pourch aunning. there i was beating the off with a piece of crown molding looking like some kind of fool. i was begining to wonder who was going to win the battle. well that was my excercise. I was trying to get food out for the poor birds. I threw out a piece of cardboard to put the food on and it sailed out for ever and I had to just aim for it as the food fell through the snow- some of it did. well that was my games and activity for the day . I hope you are still laughing I had to look as silly as a goose, now that I think of it...mac -
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Glad I moved!
I don't have to deal with all that.. DO NOT miss that one bit!!!! Yesterday went out without a coat. It was cold this morning, but that is normal.
That snow broke my gutters on my house when I lived in OHIO and I lived in the D...
snow belt...
Way too much snow and way too cold!
Further south would be even better, but SC is good I have the beach here I love the beach!
And sometimes it took me 4 hours to get home when it snowed and it normally took 30 minutes
Last year during your blizzard I was sitting up here in south carolina 75 degrees outside and saw the VERY road I turned off on and I would have been stuck on for 5 hours!!!!!
No NEED for all that!!!!
I had a 4X4 and everyone used to follow my tracks!!!!!!
I got spring fever here... no snow to ruin that for me!!!!!
Have fun in the winterwonderland!!!
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Joy
it sprungs all over here and I reall love this cute little sprung...mac
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Thank GOD I have the internet... I am laughing so hard now... don't mind me I know you don't know why...
Have a great day!
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Lots of emotion is weaved through this piece. You expose your heart here. A very good piece of poetry.
Kelli
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This harkens back to innocence. I sincerely miss feeling like this. Great job capturing it.
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nice!
This is a 'feel good' piece it's nice to see you pen with such an easy flare, and i guess it helps that your subject has you 'sprung'! l.o.l.! good write poetess!
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