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A Lovers Gold Mine

Succulent cherry lips, I long to taste,
those of yours touched by passion’s grace.
Immediately I am turned up,
ready and willing to fill your cup.

Tongue magically parts your sweet lips,
my hands rest tenderly on your hips.
Eyes dancing with yours, we become weak,
temptation now high, I reach my peak.

Hungrily I attack; you enjoy,
adrenaline pumping; loves new joy.
Tasting the inside, my tongue does play,
making you hotter, you’re now my clay.

Molding perfectly, bodies entwine,
none more beautiful, a lover's gold mine.

Reaching up under your blouse, I squeeze,
tongue buried deep, you fall to your knees.
Moment of truth, you attack in return,
forever on my lips, your kiss burns.

Heated like no other, I am yours,
intense it became passions in store.
Sparkling eyes, lust filled them both,
I longed for, the intimate hold.

Legs draped patiently over mine,
between soft lips, your moaning a sign.
You too felt the burning of desire,
as our bodies ignite, set on fire.

Power packed in that seductive kiss,
now on with the rest, that of passions bliss.

Author notes

Pic prompt, and "I could kiss you forever"

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  • Mairi bheag gold member
    March 9, 2008

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    Strong off the blocks, this one, and keeps up the sprint all the way to the tape. Keep working on structure, and you will add a few more trophies to your collection. Good luck in this contest.


  • Haunted-Memory silver member
    March 8, 2008

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    The poets poem is hot and sensual steaming with a desire of a burning kiss, this poem sends the imagination of the reader to dizzy hieghts. A great read that the poetess has penned here. (HM)


  • Mandy4Men
    March 8, 2008
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    I will come and kiss you any time you ask!!!
    Hubby working all weekend, what is a girl to do!

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