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one of many faces

I am...
I am...
Too many characters,
I have lost track.
Which one is real?

Masks and paints.
I am a blank canvas.
So paint me
whatever you want.

Chameleon..
Hypocrite...
Too many metamorphosis I have gone though.
I have lost track.
Who am I?

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Kassy is a freak
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  • Lost In Dreaming
    March 11, 2008

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    this is an amazing write--i have felt so lost two and i dont even know who the real me is sometimes--good job and the best of luck to you

    ♥ meg

  • Mom of Blondes
    March 8, 2008

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    Wow, this is a very good write to go along with the picture. It comes across as someone who is trying to be everything to everyone to please them and has lost themselves in the midst of it.

    These are my favorite lines:

    I am a blank canvas.
    So paint me
    whatever you want.

    How many young people must actually feel what those lines say. Very well written. Good luck in the contest.


  • ixtli
    March 8, 2008

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    I really like this poem. "I am a blank canvas so paint me whatever you want" < those are some great words. Nice job with this!


  • Kassandra Nyktos
    March 8, 2008
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    wow....im impressed...good job and good luck

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