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Rapunzel

As the world comes crashing down
I sit here still in my room
paying no attention to the rain
penetrating my window sealed off
to the world.
He calls my name but I have
no answer.

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  • xxemoheartsxx
    March 15, 2008
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    i loveddd it but ithink u should write more on it!