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Pain

Why does it hurt?
I bang my head in the pavement
inducing pain,
trying to suppress deeper agony.
Blood rushing through my ears
to drown the screams inside my mind.
Blood to cloud my vision,
scarlet to erase the nightmares.
I twist my body at impossible angles
for the epiphany to bloom.
Why does it hurt so much
inside my aching heart?

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  • z etoile
    March 8, 2008
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    Wow what an intense show of emotions I loved this piece awesome job!


    • DayDreamMuse
      March 8, 2008
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      Thank you! This is a very evokative poetry with a sharper edge! Quite new for me and it's experimental.