Oceanic rushes;
On a whirlpool of ideas,
Formed on persistent tidal waves.
Your pulling me into your rounded universe...
Ebb to flow...
Moon swayed emotions;
My earthly orbit now falling into your ocean;
I found my place in this world...
A contest entry
- Image Inspiration by Hadji Murad.
300 points, ended April 27, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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daemon (genius)
it flowed through you to the external world didn't it ?
missing you, i think about you often,
NV
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Short and sweet a great iadea breaking the idea everybody had about this poem
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This is beautifully compacted, yet gloriously poetic. A definite pleasure to read.
Bill
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