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Our Secret

 
 
 
It is not a secret life I crave

but a Life!
 
I have found it in the
touch of a hand,
the warmth of a kiss,
soft words spoken...

"I love you"

but, for now
it is to be our
 
'secret'
 
 
 

 

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For you, with my love...you know who you are.

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  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    March 8, 2008
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    this is super,, you are such a romantic,, good luck and win xx

  • Bad Bill
    March 8, 2008

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    You know, although you're known as a rhymer, you ought to write more free verse poetry--you're equally as good at both. This particular piece is an excellent "secret" love poem.

    Bill


  • GrowlingBear
    March 8, 2008

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    This brings to mind dark conetations. although it is about lovebut why a secret.....oooh very well done


  • CountryCousin
    March 8, 2008

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    Wonderful.

    Short but so sweet and it leaves the reader guessing. This was a delightful poem to read. I am glad again that I clicked on it.


  • Gwenevere
    March 8, 2008

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    AH!!! Love at it's best when no-one knows but the two of you.good luck to you both and I hope you will find all your dreams together, Ros


  • Pearl-1
    March 8, 2008
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    we all have our secret sue..great write


  • Haunted-Memory silver member
    March 8, 2008

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    Sweet

    Secrets unfold with memorable moments, bringing warmth to ones heart as they look back in thoughts with smiles of cherished moments. what the poetess writes here on the page is no more than the magic of such perfect times and is beautiful. (HM)


  • Life is a Beach gold member
    March 8, 2008
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    This says a lot! Very romantic! ***Pam***


  • Puppydog gold member
    March 8, 2008

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    SO , SO SWEET!!!!!!!

    Just reading this and its innocence is bringing a wonderful brightness to my day. The one this is meant for is sure to be touched.


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    March 8, 2008

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    Wonderful writing Sue. Very romantic indeed. Deep too. Love indeed is wanting to break out.

    Love
    Wayne Leon
    x


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    March 8, 2008
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    Nice one, Sue


  • Sunshine Always
    March 8, 2008

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    Sigh!!!! You have spoken for many here sue, including myself. There is so much unwritten in your words my friend... Excellent...mal

  • Bob Fox
    March 8, 2008

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    So soft

    Like a whisper in the wind this tender secret between two lovers and the apprehension of one day expoloing the future aloud and dancing


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    March 8, 2008

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    Hidden love wanting to break out and LIVE!!

    This is wonderful Sue... says so much... kinda a bit like my life at the moment funnily enough!

    Well done and good luck!

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