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Haiku: Peace

secluded flower
blooms in solitude ... at home
in its own love poem

myra

2002

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Written February 9th, 2002

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  • Virginia Logsdon
    January 31, 2005
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    excellent!

    Excellent poetry!Vivid description in a few short words!


  • myrataal silver member
    November 21, 2004
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    Thank you, dearest poetic toe in its own dancing woe ...

  • pozo
    July 10, 2004
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    Wonderful haiku! I loved it, it had so few and so simple words but was very beautiful. This was a great poem- well done

  • Fred
    September 29, 2002
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    excellent

    Great poem! I sensed the peace even though the word itself was never used. Those are the types of poems I like where the title is never used in it, yet the words in the poem bring out the title's meaning.


  • gecko
    February 10, 2002
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    I really like this one

  • yolanda
    February 9, 2002
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    Peaceful.


  • February 9, 2002
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    Hey! This was nice!


  • myrataal silver member
    February 9, 2002
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    L,A & S: I appreciate your graceful prescence.


  • scatcatblu gold member
    February 9, 2002
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    peace indeed :)


  • myrataal silver member
    February 9, 2002
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    A symbol of peaceful acceptance of seclusion. Thanks Mysty.

  • aiwaz
    February 9, 2002
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    delicate perfume


  • Lurie
    February 8, 2002
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    AW very nice!


  • February 8, 2002
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    this is a beautiful flower you have created :)

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