It took so long this time
To realize you went away
For a while I thought
It was supposed to end this way
Now lying here alone
Makes the heartache overgrown
And something tells me
You won't be coming home
And i'm trying not to miss you
Why'd I have to kiss you
Everything's an issue in my head
Bitterness is falling
Selfishness is calling
I can't help but want you in my bed
Not one tear fell from my eye
But tonight they fall down like a rain
Emptiness is filling my heart
Who knew nothingness could cause such pain
And i'm trying not to miss you
Why'd I have to kiss you
Everything's an issue in my head
Bitterness is falling
Selfishness is calling
I can't help but want you in my bed
My room is empty because memory of you
Haunted corners of my mind
A place that doesn't make me think of you
Is somewhere i've yet to find
Let me know what you think :]
Comments
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This is so sad, but it's really good! It sorta reminds me of Bella, from Twilight, in New Moon. It's sad. I hope you keep up the great work!
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Wow, what a beautifully written poem. It really captured the very part of loneliness that one would feel not having the one that they love there with them. I liked certain paragraphs such as:
'Emptiness is filling my heart
Who knew nothingness could cause such pain...'
What a great description you have created in that sentence. And ofcourse the very last stanza which stuck out and really made this poem what it is- powerful.
'A place that doesn't make me think of you
Is somewhere i've yet to find...'
Truly sad and just in that sentence I can relate to that very feeling.
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