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Somewhere Faraway

 

 

 

I want to find a small, quaint town

and simply appear one day

unobtrusive, with an air of mystique

 

stirring interests as I smile at everyone

as if I’ve known them all my life and

settle on the outskirts in a small house  

 

of my own, in front of a warm fire place,

sipping brandy, writing poetry by day,

and making languid love all night.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • me and nothing else
    March 29

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    I'm sure you will find a place quite like that on your trip! It will be a memorable one! I like it very much. I would change nthing about it. Very well written.*_*


  • Auburn Sunrise gold member
    March 9
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    Hah!

    Don't we all????
    Well written and very enticing!


  • Margaret Denham
    March 8
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    A wonderful dream to hold onto, Michael.




  • LittleMoon silver member
    March 8

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    Sounds about perfect MJ but too late for me to dream about such things. Conjures up a wonderful vision in my heart though of someone long ago. Very well done


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    March 8

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    Yep... I wouldn't mind going somewhere like that myself!!

    Wouldn't anyone!

    Sounds like a beautiful place...

  • x-Black-Butterfly-x silver member
    March 8

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    awwww this is such a beautiful write the imagery that you have painted in it is so strong with love and warmth.a beautiful piece daddy

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