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Thoughts

Written quite some time ago when I satrted writing after many years not writing.

                            THOUGHTS

                I think I'm a budding writer
                But really I don't know
                When I try to do my homework
                The pen just doesn't flow.
                But, maybe, if I concentrate
                And really persevere
                My writing will be better
                Than what I've written here.

Learning is a continuous process

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  • AusStar silver member
    June 1, 2008

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    Lovely, you are a budding writer, its funny some days I think i'll never be able to write another poem and then all of sudden one just pops into my head!!


    • rbruce gold member
      June 1, 2008
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      I am much the same but at the moment my head has lots of starts and subjects but nothing on paper.

  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    March 8, 2008
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    this is great don't doubt your work they are really Good


    • rbruce gold member
      March 8, 2008
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      Hi Red, Thank you for you comments on my writing. I am pleased that it gives some pleasure to others, for the writing belongs to the reader even though the writer owns the copyright. Thanks again. Cheers and best wishes, Bob