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I can read your heartbeat
like a graph on your smile
up, up and away-
like a balloon it flew.
somewhere on the moon
I caught your smile- and
knew you were too
special, unique, amazing
to ever be left alone
without a warm hug
or a blessing in
the whitest silver lining.
I flew just for you-
trying to find a miracle
& turn your life ‘round
just because.
until you told me that
it was okay- I didn’t have
to fly so far away anymore
& something died in me-
until you turned ‘round
& told me I was your star,
your world, your miracle
your everything.
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Author notes
OPTION 1:
With you by Chris Brown
A contest entry
- Options [PIF] by Beauty Of Silence.
650 points, ended March 19, 2008, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Amazing poem! Loved every line of this poem... there were so much emotions let loose to linger around this poem... the words fit so well!
I love this poem so very very much! And because its based on my favourite song, i love it even more! Your last two stanzas were brilliant! "i was your smile, your world, your miracle" WOW! these were fine words... so romoantic to have someone tell you this!
Very romantic poem indeed, touched my heart and brought a smile on my face! Thanks for following all my rules... and tahnk you so much for this lovely entry... such a pleasure reading this!
Much love always,
Ranji
(ps. i know who you are dear friend! I can tell your style... can distinguish it from others... anyways... good luck! love ya loads!
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aaww
how do I describe this piece? It had so much sentiments yet was not too cheesy. I love how it seemed like something out of a fantasy book but with love entwined in it.
When we are in love, be it any type, we want to go all out but sometimes, it is not needed to go so far. beautiful message here. so lovely!
the last line summed up everything. 
literally. the poem also did follow along the lines of "with you". this is a sure winner in my eyes.
loveeeees,
transit
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