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Freestyle Rap Part 1 (Hood Version)

Beat: Busta Phymes - Pass The Torch

(verse 1)
Shots out, tell em wat its all about
U run strait then you wanna run the wrong route
You sit and fuss, cross ya arms, and you wanna pout
U act like coffee comin right out of a tea spout

The Mad Hatter ima tell you were the games at
Its in the dark being drained by the blood bat
Ya hood stars and ya cars take em all back
Cuz true game and true words is wat we all lack

Dissin women and the innocent is not the deal
Cuz im another hodd n***a ima keep it real
Im not attackin man, im jus speakin how i feel.
Im jus another hungry man tryna get a meal

At the end of the month man im payin bills
At the end of the day i call my n***a Will
My girl dont want kids so she takes a pill
And wen im done wit all of dat, i lay back and chill


(hook 2x)
Bar one, bar 2, bar three, and four
Shots out, shots in, right out the door
In west, in the east, anywhere we go
Cuz this the game in ya face and im in the door yo!

(verse 2)
You see i talk about myself when i write rhymes
And yes i talk dat crazy s**t like everytime
Me and my twin the same but different like lemon-lime
We like different times of day but we still shine

Its really borin when i hear about this everyday
About another dude in the block bein gay
It gots to tell ya homo-phobe is not my em-mo
And gay jokes jus aint funny no mo!!

I listen to rock, r&b, and even rap
im jus hopin dat one day i dont get *clapped*
And if im eva in the done wrong i wanna take it back
Im jus tryna use a *hunnit* bucks jus make a *rack*

I like to keep my nose up outta everybody biz
I leave boxin to da pros and fightin to da kidz
I say a prayer everytime i wanna do a bid
Im jus a free soul; and thas jus wat it did

(hook 2x)

(interlude)

(verse 3)
How many seeds does it take for a tree grow
How many books can i read so dat i can know
How many rhymes do i write that i can flow
How many lights i gotta fix so that i can glow

Wat is the meanin of this
Am i bein teased
Am i bein hated
Am i bein pleased

I'd probably slow it up
It probably falls down
But my worst fear
Is never seein it come around

I know that we all cant jus live forever
But as long as we here, why dont we all jus live together
Lets make this game go all for the better
My song to the world, im writing it in a letter!!

(chrous 3x)

Author notes

* gettin clapped* = gettin shot
*hunnit* = one hundred dollars
*rack* = one thousand dollars

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  • MsFord
    June 12, 2008
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    raw


  • MyAddictionIsLove
    March 26, 2008

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    uh oh... its tre on da mic ya heard me... lol i love how u *bla-bla*=whateva lol translate fa dem who dont kno. but no how i likes da message dis send.. but aiight den keep it pimpin....

  • HopeSunshine
    March 8, 2008
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    Great

    I thnk dis was a great song. Its ur format dat neva changes. Jus luk u! Keep up da gud work.


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    March 8, 2008

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    oh boy tre this is really a piece of RAP that reads all to familar in the cities,not into this type of music, but ya all know how to mix words to clearly state the desires to find the next meal...I think I need to hear this on tape ya know...lol... good luck with this...you know ur stuff!
    Moons