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Let Go!

Baggae, Baggage, Baggage!!!
If it's trash then it's a thing in the past
and you got your past bagged up in this bag
holding on and not disposing it but you dumpin it on MY ass!
And the more we talk, the more bags I see
and even Stevie Wonder can see that you're takin your past out on me
your heart is a house, but baby you're a pack rat
keepin all this pain, keepin this and keepin that
and it's too much for me to clean on my own
why are you so oblivious to the trash in this home?
I feel like the trash man comin to dispose
but you ain't takin out da' trash, let that crap go
(Sigh)
And you tested your exes to break up with you
tested their limits and ONE flipped the script on you
and now you doin the same to me
but I'm much harder more difficult see?
So stop your manipulation, baby let that crap go!
You say you expect me to have doubts
and when I try to come inside you steady shuttin me out
you do THAT to the world, but I'm not the world don't you know?
I'm your man, not your past, baby let that crap go!
You say you do things just to see what I do
I don't succumb to manipulation, I don't JUMP when you tell me to.
Are you TRYING to make me have doubts
while testin me to break up with you?
If you want me to stay so much then why you testin me to leave you?
I'm not your past, I'm not your punching bag
I'm not like your dad, and I'm not the past boyfriend you had
I'm not the world, I'm not your problems
and shutting me out is not gonna solve'em
Let that crap go! Let it GO! LET GO!!!
SAY GOODBYE, THROW IT AWAY, MOVE ON, RELEASH YOUR HOLD
the past is dead, the past is old,
baby please just let it go
Choos ye' this day whom you will keep
a past full of pain and trash or a fututre of happiness with me
You CANNOT have BOTH, I don't SHARE that easily baby, I'm selfish like that
quit bein a bag lady, with all that baggage on your back
let go of your past, let go and be free
choose as of NOW between your past and me
the decision is NOT hard, just say goodbye to it please
or would you rather stay down and say good bye to me?

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I wrote this for my girl.

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  • Aurielle
    March 10, 2008
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    really good I like this.


  • MahoganyFlow
    March 10, 2008

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    Thought this was good. Inspiring in a sense to show ppl to let go of the past b/c it can only hold you back. Thanks for the comment on my poem.


  • SOLS.Moonlight
    March 9, 2008

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    This poem is mind blowing, I can feel the anger in this. But you and your girl need to iron out ya'll differences or it ain't even worth it. Hang in there though.


  • Expression
    March 8, 2008

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    oh wow...yall really gotta sort this crap out..it's too many problems...maybe she's not really ready for a really serious relationship so maybe u should let her go and if things change then who knows but until then yea really get this worked out...otherwise nice flow...nice rhyme
    MUCH LUV ALWAYZ
    ♥kaila♥8rose*