Just tell me what you want
Why cant you just go
I want to be happy
This everyone knows
But your holding me back
Just freaking leave me alone
I don’t want you
I don’t need you
Why cant you just see
You brought out the worse person in me!!
Tears fall as I just cry
Asking myself “god why”[?]
I don’t understand im so cold and scared
Just go away why wont you leave
Take whatever just let me be!
Your hurting me, cant you see
Inside and out im worthless baby.
This all doll you did to me!
A contest entry
- Pain by confusionismylife.
300 points, ended March 14, 2008, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Dont need your comment on this poem, its personal so whatever..!!!
Comments
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Um. Wow. Excellent write; I heard the pain behind the words, made me think about someone I once knew.
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this poem is so neat. you did a really good job with description it was almost like i could see what was going on. keep up the good work.
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This is serious. I really like it, I'm sorry for whatever happened. I love ya, girl. Good luck in the contest, I think that you'll win!! You deserve to!! Great writing as always. Only1love4ever
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deep lots of thoughts i like it, nesa
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oh wow... i like this!
keep writing!
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Inside and out im worhtless baby,
This all doll you did to me
♥
the ending was my favorite
Good luck in the contest!!!
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I can't help it, I have to leave a comment. Sorry.
This is really good. I love how it just flows, and none of it has been forced. Great work love.
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I love this poem, you have a lot of skill and people can learn a lot from you. Its very sad but you seem to construct it with hate which brings another stog emotion. Its amazing, you might note want a comment bcuz its personal but it deserved one.
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Excellent!
Way to weave a perfectly penned piece for this contest!
I wish you all the best, and thanks for sharing here.
Much love daughter dear~
Dad. x
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