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Window Scent

~~~

Dusty sill,
Reverberating presence,
Resounds within my soul.

Moonlight spills,
Onto empty page,
Filling it with love
and stories of night.

Benevolent shadow,
of my pen,
Assembles all my dreams.

Musky scented window,
Perfumed possibilities,
Leaving indentations,
of belated morning.

~~~



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  • grannyeri gold member
    March 14, 2008

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    Liked this old picture and the poem you created to accompany it. Liked the flow and the verbiage used here - very visual, fills the senses as well.


  • maralisa silver member
    March 13, 2008
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    this os a wonderful poem thank you for sharing this with the group


  • Amy Meneses
    March 13, 2008

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    you know, with such short pieces every word must count. This piece makes every word amazing and powerful and connect with such harmony. I actually had a contest about writing, this would have been a great entre. All well. haha


  • Hetha gold member
    March 12, 2008
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    This is just beautiful and filled with lovely imagery!

  • piccola silver member
    March 12, 2008
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    nothing like the smell of dust ... it's kind of unforgettable and does leave traces

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