You're just like the others
lyrical tag name
It's me who looks for something else
I don't see a stereotype
but now I'm starting to see
your too tight pants
unravel slightly
in front of me
Maybe you're cliche
maybe it's too late
to trade in my heart for someone new
I want to try
I want it to work
with you
But I know
or actually I don't
see
why you won't even attempt it
what are you so afraid of?
People like me get hurt everyday
doesn't matter who
does the hurting
I'd always forgive you
and maybe
that's precisely the problem
boys like you
only want girls
that are capable of hurting them
Masochist
A contest entry
- Brake up/Teen-age Heart-Break by live-laugh-love.
450 points, ended July 8, 2008, 22 entries
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Wondeful!
I had to laugh at the way you ended this poem. So bluntly , so dry!
Woderful pen!
Regards,
Jennifer
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hu?
you poem is confusing
but what i do understand is verry well
it is well written
so mabey just add a Athur note explaing what is going on
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