Trying to propel forward,
yet anchored with heavy chain.
You waltz into my dreams.
Threatened to go insane.
I let you go, I'm moving on,
relentlessly I see your face.
Where can I go to escape you?
Does there exist such a place?
The chaos you instill,
pandemonium at best,
leaves no room for others,
as if there was contest.
Every night I close my eyes
and pray for sound sleep.
Instead in fits of joy and sorrow,
deep rest I cannot keep.
I cannot do this anymore
seeing you behind her back.
Even if it's just a dream
tis real enough for me to crack.
Please just tell me if I'm too late.
Tell me my dreams are wrong.
I fear I can't have my own life
unless I know you're gone.
Please tell me what you think
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i get it
it's like no matter what you do to try and forget that person they are always their. you cant get rid of him or her. even if they broke you or loved you and you messed up. you just cant let them go. and it hurts to see them and it hurts to be around them. -
wonderful
I have alwaysed loved reading your poems, they are so great. Eventhough it has been a while since I have read one they are still as great as the rest. Good work I loved it.
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i can absolutley relate to ur words. they r so true and i feel what ur saying.
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This was an awesome poem! I can relate to it so well. my favorite lines were...let you go, I'm moving on,
relentlessly I see your face. that is how I felt about my ex-bf. great job!!
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wow! This was awesome! A feeling i can totally relate to.. "i let you go, im moving on, relentlessy i see your face" i think that might be my fave line. Its really hard to get someone out of your head and heart sometimes, no matter how hard you try. great job!
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again..i love it...wats it about though!!??!
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wow
The best I have read out of all ur writes so far! I love it, I could feel the words and relate to them very well....it is painful and frusterating and even consuming at times to go through such feelings...excellent piece here!!!!
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complicated mix of emotions here, i think. well written.
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I really enjoyed this poem. It was very deep and heartfelt. Nice rhyming, not forced at all!
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Oh my goodness
What a poem this is you have done an excellent job here
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oh wow, this is amazing, sounds very sad, and,. bitter ..yes? i wonder what happened. great job on the poem. - eleno
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Not really bitter. Just sad and confused... I want to be able to just forget about her but now that I want to move on she's everywhere I look...
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very good
It seems you poured your heart into this one. It is filled with emotions, pain, love and hope. It is very strong and powerful. very good darlee77
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