oh fragile flower
faintly painted in sorrow
wilted poppy dance
myra
2002
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Written February 9th, 2002
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Sorrow blinks tears
Of Summer leaves,
Beauty emerges, smiles. -
I wanted to read something, that gentle sorrow is sitting in my heart. I found this picture and my heart melted, what an art you have- thankyou. Love, Sorrow and searching RXXXX
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would love to see this worked into a tanka Myra
pwease??
grin -
Such a lovely write
Makes me feel warmth in my soul
You are good poet!
:oP
A beautiful piece, really! -
Yes Lurie: sometimes there is sadness in beauty and vice versa ... thanks for the comment.
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Ah slag! In Afrikaans 'slag met woorde' means 'you have a way with words' ... Thank you, I discovered your haiku before you could mention it ...
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Sadly beautiful Myra!
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I'll post the corrected version on my site. Thanks, Myra...see how synergy works...one poem begats another.
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almost a haiku (heh-heh) should have checked before posting it.
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Upon this hapless hour
Stricken by higher powers
grieve petal showers -
LOL, S! As you've stated: everything moves together!
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no fair - you already have a winner - I'll have to get faster at this game - I was gonna say it doesn't matter where it's been - it still hears the music :] xx
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Thanks silver, for visiting and the kind comment.
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Mystysaint, you always capture the heart of my haiku: this is exactly what I was trying to outline ... thank you and here again: ***** for your critique!
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beautiful
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Sigh.. sad little flower, but it's grace is still present..
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