in the still morning
when bed is hard to resist
I'm checking mirrors
for the glint of something new
maybe something I've missed
in the gleaming eye of our storm
searching for the words that are important
if not here, then where?
if not now, then when?
these feelings have become
an unmovable force
but it's not the end of the world, of course.
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loved it. the beat of it. the way it kept me moving. great piece...these feelings have become
an unmovable force
but it's not the end of the world, of course. ... favorite line
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Sounds like what I go through every day, Thankyou for writing this piece, it is truly beautiful!
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Good
But I'm not sure if you are speaking of someone you've lost or something lost. I think it has good meter and I love that it doesn't rhyme. All in all I enjoyed it.
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if not here, then where?
if not now, then when?
I was just grousing that in the poetry forum
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Hi. Great poem! Love that last line!!
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curious how this makes so much sense... even though one might think not when first reading it... this is one of those writes you don't have to think about, and if you do it only gets in the way... great job, thats the best kind! anyway peace,
hypnorocker
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