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Sunlight Through a Closed Window



Sunlight streaming through

your closed, empty window

Dust specks floating by

collide with missed opportunities

Sprayed beams reflecting, scatter

Bright, too powerful for you

If only you could have

shattered the glass,

taken that chance

Instead you watched it

and the dimming sun fade




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  • Broken N Lost
    March 7, 2008

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    I really like this one. You have really really improved. Its been a while since i read your stuff and you very much got it in you. I like the discription of the window and the gaze to it. good job