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My world

Do you dare enter?
I must warn you though it's not fairy tale.
It's rather scary,
And I don't see why you will go.
There is no reward,
And there is just sorrow,
But if you please,
Welcome to my world.

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Short i know, but i just wanted to write it.

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  • freedomnessa
    March 15, 2008

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    wonderfully written yet again.... fabulous word use and phrasing.... thank you for sharing more of your amazing poetry


  • Grimoire
    March 7, 2008

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    An interesting poem. I assume it is speaking of eternal life as a Nocturne. Yes there is sorrow in being immortal and stuck on this rock full of fools.