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bye my love!

Maybe this is the biggest mistake
Taking you out of my life
But you don’t understand how hard it is
To keep you in it
To look at her knowing she has you!
To know she see’s you and talks to you
Every freaking day!
I just want my heart to feel ok..
It hurts to say goodbye
After everything we went through
After all the shit, it hurts so bad
I only want to cry, but you see
Even with you in my life I want to cry
So I don’t know what im dong anymore
I don’t know why but you don’t really care
You don’t talk to me anymore [ever]
So im taking it your doing ok
So ill leave you alone this is my good bye poem
I love you always did always will
I just cant stand this anymore, im sorry!

Author notes

So yeah ed if you ever get around to reading any thing like poetry again then this was for yu, you know i love you somuch when i saw you i fell for you and we went over this so much, and i cant help but love you i always will, thats the thing..but see its like you have no clue whats going on in life with me because you never call, and i dont know anything with you either and it hurts so im just letting you go.i love you

Dont need your comment on this poem, its personal so whatever..!!!

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  • broken-princess
    March 10, 2008
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    well sorry you dont need my comment but others put theres so i will as well lol, i am super sorry for this it must be really hard knowing you try and try and you love someone so much that it pretty much kills you inside i know it is hard i hope things get better for you take care,

    nessa


  • XXxSeXy-BiG-GiRlxXx
    March 8, 2008
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    OMG........

    I hope everything go's well for you soon!

    Am sorry!


    You are amazing writer, keep writing!!


  • moose man
    March 7, 2008
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    WOW

    um i was almost in tears after this. but its amazing we have all felt this way

    ~moose~


  • poeticweaver gold member
    March 7, 2008
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