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Beautiful Beginnings

Inspired by the dust on the gold.
The bark on the tree.
The leaves on the ground.
The dead on the grass.
All these things I love and pray,
That for longer they just might stay.

The heat of a fire,
The shade verses the sun.
The trees and their pleas to keep their leaves,
The glowing colors of the rain...

Sitting here with my pen in hand,
Watching the season bloom...
Over and over again.

Author notes

A happier piece of mine about the wonder of fall...
Written November 30th, 2003

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    December 1, 2003
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    Awe, I just love the wonders of fall, the mystic feeling in the breeze as time changes into another beautiful season, you have capyured this beautifully, thanks for sharing your poetic thoughts you jot and form a poem so wonderfully as I read I feel so at peace, kinda a calming effect to this, awe, I needed that.
    Thanks so much again for sharing, lets keep writing friend! ~Smiles~

    -Timothy