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She's too Young

this girl is confused
no birth control she used
and she did it without out protection
she was in a moment of affection
she had sex with some guy she barley knew
she might catch an STD or two
she could even be pregnant
she doesn’t know his last name
now she is in shame
what if a baby comes of this
her teen years she will miss
have to become a mom
she will miss her prom
staying at home
raising a child
this is what happens
if your love is wild
she might even have AIDS
away her childhood fades
she's scared to go to the doctor and see
she don’t want to know what it could be
her mom doesn’t know she is crazy like this
what an influence for her little sis
she might just hide
and keep her feelings bottled up inside
i hope she figures out what to do
this sucks when it happens to you

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contest: what is she thinking? jayda rayne

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  • BabyBun silver member
    March 14, 2008
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    One can feel the conflict - good write


  • Micro
    March 9, 2008

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    I loved this one. I felt the poet's agony in wondering. Congratulations on winning the Honorable trophy. Very good poem. Your take on the pic was great.


  • Asylaarix
    March 8, 2008

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    Wow ... this is ... so deep with emotion and powerful within your words ... There is so much going on in this girls head ... and it's ... it's all things possible ... I love this ... very powerfully penned ... thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest ...

    Jayda


  • cRaZyGoOd
    March 7, 2008
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    wow this is great but yet so sad