Your skin is the essence of my arousal
Awakening every single sense at once
Taking me to the deepest parts of the sensual
The smell of your skin is that of frankincense
The cherished treasure of the kings that came before you
Exposing the royal lineage that was once unknown
To touch your skin is like touching the mane of a mighty lion
Ferocious yet at the same time docile
Powerful enough to conquer all who enter your domain
The sight of the soft light upon your skin reveals your glory
Helping me understand why Jupiter did not reveal his true form to those he loved
The sight of your skin is enough to cause the breath of life to escape me
I hear your skin call out to me
Beckoning me to escape to a world unknown
Inhabited by the immortal soul of Aphrodite who teaches us her art of love
The taste of your skin is Heavenly
It is as milk and honey in the rivers of the most holy of places
Giving me a taste of life eternal
Your skin is the essence of my arousal
Awakening every single sense at once
Taking me to the deepest parts of the sensual
Author notes
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v316/Anstorm/Sensual_masochism.png
A contest entry
- enter your prewrites here. by individuality.
363 points, ended March 13, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Sexual seduction (pics) by joleahe.
300 points, ended April 2, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Give me your thoughts!!
Comments
1 - 12 of 12
-
This is a beautiful poem
Well done good luck in the contest
-
i like the smell of skin and i like the religious aspect you delved into here too
thank you for entering
-
-
Thank you... I'm glad you liked it... I
-
-
This is very nicely written. I really like the first stanza and how you repeated it. I think it's a really strong point in this poem. I don't usually read sensual type poems but I really enjoyed this. It makes me wish I had someone in my life I could relate this too LOL Great job.
-
-
Awwww.... That person will find YOU when they are mature enough to DESERVE you.... kisses... Thank you for the comment...
-
-
haha, well thank you.. I will be waiting for that person.
-
-
-
well... i need a cold shower mmmm a good night for this
I am tired of war going to hunt some mmmmmmm skin lol I love this I do sexy sensual
-
-
Thank you Rheea.... Haven't heard from you in a while... How are you?
-
-
Ahhh....
very sensual indeed, mikki. I loved the imagery you created in this piece, soothing, and real.
Great choice in sharing with the group
E♥
-
-
Thanks Pif!! I know you always enjoy soft sensual poems figured you might like this one!
-
-
I'm liking this! It has that light sensual feel to it. makes me all touchy-feely. great job!
-
-
So sweet!!
Aww Maurice... I didn't expect you to comment because you were there during the roughdraft... That was very sweet of you to do!!!!
-
Adding your comment:
1 - 12 of 12
