Diving

You dived
into the black...

we've already been and gone.

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10 words see prompt on contest page

A contest entry

PIF QUICKIE 10/10/10 by Immortal Obscurity. 450 points, ended March 7, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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Kari
March 7, 2008

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ooooooo I like this..you did well and took a different turn with it well done and the best of luck in the contest!

Immortal Obscurity
March 7, 2008

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Ooh, pretty... It's elegant and creepy, in such a twisted way! Well done, and good luck!

Laura xxx

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