I find pieces of your heart on the floor and it rips my soul apart I don't want you to hurt any more so I pray to the God above that he helps me love and to turn your tears into roses and your pain into gain and that you will laugh loud, smile big, and be floating on clouds before the day ends becuase I'm here for you baby, and so is He, forever may it be. Amen.
Time passes, seasons change, the phases of the moon don't stay the same. Thus is the path of love until you find the Truth, one hate can't rebuke, a love that is immortal, eternal, ever lasting, and never ceasing. Amen.
Author notes
You might be wondering why I choose this background and the reason I did is becuase of the first prayer. It is to show that no voice goes unheard, no tear unseen, and no pieces from a broken heart unfound.
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heheh I remeber this one still as beautiful and full of meaning as last time.
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Good job. The second prayer was closer to waht I was looking for. Rhyme. Although, both prtrayed the emotion and description, but I think that it would have been more effective had it been in poetry form.
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one hate can't rebuke, a love that is immortal, eternal, ever lasting, and never ceasing
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Omg!!!!!
My heart is aching again. I love this prayer. I've prayed the same one though not as beautfuly.
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Thank you so very much. I am sure you have prayed just as beautifully. I just got done reading your latest poem it is absolutely entrancing.
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