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What am i to do?

Love has left my heart
too hard for me to find
Lost, all alone
nothing left to be won

what am i to do??


I am floating
            D
            O
            W
            N
              a stream in which i am to drown
And it seems as if I'm
                      F
                        A
                        L
                          L
                          I
                            N
                            G
                              about to hit the ground   
What am i to do??
Oh.
What am i to do??       

My cloud isn't substantial enough
to hold my weighted heart
No silver lining to be found
it's all falling apart....

What am i to do??

I'm a feather floating
                      D
                      O
                      W
                      N
                      into the fire and flames
and all this time I'm
                      F
                      A
                        L
                        L
                          I
                          N
                            G
                            because of all my shame

what am i to do??
oh
What am i to do??

Dead as dust
alone i rot
save my soul
save my heart
pain stricken mind
full of hate
save me, Lord
before it's too late...

Oh what can i do???

Author notes

Lord can be taken as any reference, it can be god, Satan, Buddha, or any God/deity you believe in, for me it's no one.

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Comments


  • takemypainaway
    August 30, 2008
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    hmmm i never knew that you were into satan i guess i will just keep lerning about you!!


    • AngelOfBetrayal
      August 31, 2008
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      I'm not really a satanist, but to me he is the most believable "god" of a religion, so i do study that and any reference in my poems to Lord, will most likely be him, unless it's in a bad sense, then its the christian god.


  • dark-dreamer112
    March 10, 2008
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    I love the poem! Brilliant as usual. ^_^