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Bruises, Muses, and Fuses

Life brings unexpected things
And the surprises arise
With blessings descending
A whole new beginning

Muses fusing healing old bruising
And butterflies in starry eyes
These fresh times are sublime times
With the blending of unpretending souls

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  • Amana Araya Jabari
    March 28, 2008
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    Fabulous! I love the title too.


  • Sunchild
    March 14, 2008
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    Charming

    Blending of unpretending souls, butterflies in starry eyes. Man! You're poetry is like candy, it's so sweet the way it rhymes and your colorful word choice and whimsical theme leave a good taste in the mouth of my mind....Lol. That sounded better in my head. Really nice job AJ I've missed your stuff.

    Sunny ^_^


    • Blood Wedding
      March 25, 2008
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      i like candy ^_^

      lol. thanks for you comment. just your comment is full of beautifulness can't wait to read some of your latest stuff. and yes, its been awhile, yes indeedly. i hope to get back on more often.