I want to wake up in the eternal morning
on the clouds of his cheeks.
Just to look inside where the sun shines in his eyes,
the last time that I saw him was on Calvary.
The sun had gone from his face as he cried then died,
but now I know that he is there.
I have but to climb the stairs and then
while resting on the clouds of his cheeks.
The light that was passed to me will be in my smile.
At last I have come home but not as an only child.
on the clouds of his cheeks.
Just to look inside where the sun shines in his eyes,
the last time that I saw him was on Calvary.
The sun had gone from his face as he cried then died,
but now I know that he is there.
I have but to climb the stairs and then
while resting on the clouds of his cheeks.
The light that was passed to me will be in my smile.
At last I have come home but not as an only child.
Author notes
I am just playing with some thoughts that have been entering my head in the last few days. Several people that I know have passed away in the last few weeks and now we heard that Patrick Swayze has pancreatic cancer.
A contest entry
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500 points, ended March 21, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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Congrats on the HM!
Such a mix of emotions within your words. I like the ideas you have played with, made a lovely piece. Sorry you have lost so many people recently. I love the idea of them waiting for us. Congrats on the HM


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Congratulations on the HM with this one. This is so sad. Sorry that several people you know have passed away lately.


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Wow..what a touching work of poetry C.C. God Bless Your for sharing this. You are one of the best. Thanks again.


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I am so sorry to hear about people that you know passing away. Thank you for this write and entering into my contest!
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A bit sad
here in this write.
Jim

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