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On The Clouds

I want to wake up in the eternal morning
on the clouds of his cheeks.
Just to look inside where the sun shines in his eyes,
the last time that I saw him was on Calvary.
The sun had gone from his face as he cried then died,
but now I know that he is there.
I have but to climb the stairs and then
while resting on the clouds of his cheeks.
The light that was passed to me will be in my smile.
At last I have come home but not as an only child.

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I am just playing with some thoughts that have been entering my head in the last few days. Several people that I know have passed away in the last few weeks and now we heard that Patrick Swayze has pancreatic cancer.

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    March 28, 2008

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    Congrats on the HM!

    Such a mix of emotions within your words. I like the ideas you have played with, made a lovely piece. Sorry you have lost so many people recently. I love the idea of them waiting for us. Congrats on the HM


  • TizMoi
    March 26, 2008

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    Congratulations on the HM with this one. This is so sad. Sorry that several people you know have passed away lately.


  • Patpowers
    March 12, 2008

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    Wow..what a touching work of poetry C.C. God Bless Your for sharing this. You are one of the best. Thanks again.


  • z etoile
    March 7, 2008

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    I am so sorry to hear about people that you know passing away. Thank you for this write and entering into my contest!


  • Wandika gold member
    March 7, 2008
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    A bit sad

    here in this write.

    Jim

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