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Vanished Into Thin Air

Incurable disease
no pills to swallow
only your inner self
your soul

Go deep within
feel every inch of your body
till you know it so well
travel every vein then back
to your mind

Release the disease
if only for awhile
let it go, throw it out
give it away, smash it to bits
its gone

Feel the freedom of illness
it has vanished into thin air
floating away so no one can have it
not even you

Come back to your life
with the incurable disease
but it will not rule you
for you have this tool
your inner strength
if only for awhile...

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  • Bee gee silver member
    April 10, 2008

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    very nice

    this is very nice i like it and i wish disease would vanish and go away. i have a disease that took both my kidneys and one that affects my lungs.i have to stay strong all the time it gets so tiresome.so i'm bookmrking this.


  • Pete Greenslade
    March 13, 2008
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    you are very strong... a pleasure to read you resolve and optimism xx good luck


  • Nicada silver member
    March 9, 2008

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    Nice!

    This is a wonderful way to temporarily forget about a disablity. You show such strength and courage here. Thank you for sharing. It is very inspiring!