Join with me, my lady
onward we go through life
near and far do our travels roam
and together we go
through life with love
have no fear for I
am with you
now and forever…
When you see it is
I your gentle lover
kiss me, if you please
kiss me again for it is
I who loves you
now and forever more
seek love with me now…
© Jonathan Wikkins March 7, 2008
All Rights Reserved
A contest entry
- March Acrostic Madness by alaskanamber.
425 points, ended April 2, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Ok this poem I do enjoy however I think the first part would work better if you used a different word other then life in one of the lines, other then that this is also a beautifull penned art.
Example maybe?
Join with me, my lady
onward we go through life
near and far do our travels roam
and together we go
on this journey
with love in our heart
have no fear for I
am with you
now and forever…
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Beautiful promise.
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pretty
It's a very sweet piece. i really like the picture that you chose to go with it as well. -
*SIGHS* thou ist most romantic. the image set the scene. makes me feel like I'm in a historical romance. thanks for enteringand goodluck.
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A very nice acrostic. Well written. I hope you do well in the contest. Good luck, you did a very nice job.
Kelli
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