Streets of hatred
I walk upon
Streets of love
i am banned from
Just because
Because I am less than you
hatred of love
love of hatred
thats my world
thats how i was raised
so thats how i live
No one cares
'O Pitiful me'
No I dont wanna sit here and have a pity party
I dont care
well thats me
My world is insane
My world is broken
Its just a floating sphere in the atmosphere of my brain
and i hate my world
i wish to escape it
i wish to run from it
Somethings that i do
somethings i say
Destroy me
Oh poor me
Im so pitiful
Im all alone
Im tired of lying
Im tired of sitting on this pitty pot
Love of Hatred
Hatred of Love
again thats what my life is based on
if only someone would save me
if only someone would change me
[[Oh wait thats me and only me]]
Author notes
Hmmmm.not my best poem.I wrote it today[March 7th 08] in english class while watching a shakespeare movie and really not paying attention..[thats okay though,ive done shakespeare last year in my advanced class,B4 i had to move!!
Honestly what is your opinion?
Comments
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This is an amazing write. The flow is great and the rhyme scheme is brilliant, without sounding forced at all. Wonderful, simply wonderful.
It's a very deep and intriguing piece indeed. =]
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Thanks alot.Im glad that you liked it.
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