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Torn apart

My heart has been pulled from my chest
Takin by one who did not give me his best

My wisdom was bumped out of my mind
By one who comitted a crime

My sights were takin from my eye's
From what I'd seen turned out to be lies

My words have been takin from my lips
From one who took them away with a kiss

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  • Kelli Marie
    March 7, 2008

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    This is a really nice write. Takin should be taken, and other than that a great piece of poetry. You did a great job.
    Kelli