My heart has been pulled from my chest
Takin by one who did not give me his best
My wisdom was bumped out of my mind
By one who comitted a crime
My sights were takin from my eye's
From what I'd seen turned out to be lies
My words have been takin from my lips
From one who took them away with a kiss
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is a really nice write. Takin should be taken, and other than that a great piece of poetry. You did a great job.
Kelli

