to...
Hold
Know
Trust
Touch
Love Me,
Someone to...
swallow their pride and say I'm sorry and mean it;
let me know everything
will be alright,
even in my darkest hour.
Even in silence, you know when something is wrong,
you brush my hair,
with a simple kiss upon my lips;
When my heart sings a song...from miles away
you can feel my happines, this is Love.
Wipe my tears away,
without worrying if someone see's you.
Dedication, even when I'm not around.
Someone who's not embarassed, because I may not look my best today,
but you being my man...leads me to think I am the Beauty anytime.
You won't turn your back on me, just because things may not be as you'd
expect...give me the chances I've given you.
No one is perfect and cast the first stone.
Be real with me as you would with yourself;
if it's True Love...
why must I ask?
Stay with me,
spend time...
with me,
It doesnt matter what I've given up,
it's what we've accomplished together.
Just let me drown in you loving me...for real.
because, I doubt
if I will ever Love this way again.
I'm tired, drained of wanting to be Loved the way I deserved.
Author notes
Playwrite material, lemme know what you think?
If it isn't LOVE...
In a list
A contest entry
- 100 th GROUP CONTEST; by Dove by Partners In Crime.
900 points, ended April 12, 2008, 126 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
The Art used in ANY of my pieces I claim not as my own, I do give credit to the Artists talent, that sometimes happens to coincide with my Poetry. Thanks for your support in what I do from my Heart
Comments
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We all need to feel loved, and what better way than how you've written about it. A very emotional, sincere write
Good luck in the contest
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This is true Love Sis.....
I can read it over miles from here....
I hope he will read it too
Good luck here and in all you do...
Much luv to you and your lovedones
XXJeannette
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We all want to be loved unconditionally and love to the fullest I hope you find the love you seek. Good luck in the contest
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Thanks Huntress
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WOW OUTSTANDING
that is so sweet and sensual a one time love that will never happen again. I loved it sis
LISA
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Thank you Beauty
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And this isn't so much to ask... to be loved, cherished, comforted... all the things that come naturally with love.
I really identified with this poem after all Sal and I have been through these last months since I had the stroke. He's to me, all you've asked for in your poem. There's never been a moment when I've felt he didn't care as much as he used to, but instead has shown me even moreso, his feelings and dedication... Love?... yep.
and you'll have it too, if you don't already
Good luck in the contest
Dee
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Thanks catz
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I know exactly how that feeling is.
Sometimes it's really hard hanging on when you don't feel loved but just know that you are cared about.
Each person is important.
Kari
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Thank you Kari
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I hope you get all the love you desire thanks for entering
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Thanks PnC
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This is a more sensual piece. I loved it. This is lovely sweetheart.
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Thanks Lyrical Rain
I appreciate your comments always.
E
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Love is always a beautiful experience. Poetry in itself is love and beauty. Nice write.
Thanks for sharing with the group.
keep penning,
~The INC." -
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Thank you for commenting.
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SiS this is so right up front,
I was looking for a favorite part,
but I couldn't find one part,
the whole piece is so sweet and touching.
" I'm tired, drained of wanting to be Loved the way I deserved ".
That's a powerful ending.
Great job as always
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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Thank sister Joyce
I appreciate you always.
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It sung like lyric in my ears when I read it. It was just like a love ballard...perfect for a play. You amaze me once again...get published M'Lady.......G'Ma
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Thanks Godmother Novy
I always appreciate your support in my writing. Thank you.
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No one is perfect are the words that stuck with me in this read. Wonderful honest writing again. I love it. Very beautiful in fact. And so truthful too.
Well done Piff.
Loved it.
Wayne Leon
xx
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Wayne,
I thank you from my
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WEALL FEEL LIKE THISSOMETIMES BUT I CANSURLEYSAY GOD MAKESARE MATCHES YOURSIS OUT THERE TOO! THIS ISAVERY HONEST PEICE ANDIENJOYED THE READ - KEEP THETHUOGHTS FLOWING
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Thank you candy
I always appreciate your comments. I will return the favor
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A great write here Ms.E! I love the deepness and reality in this. I think you're gonna have a very captivating play when it all comes together. I wish you the best in yor works. I love this!
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Thank mo
Hope you are enjoying your weekend 
I am
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LOL
Looks like I should have read this one before I posted the last comment.
I've sensed through some of your writes that love for you has been one hell of a rollercoaster ride. You're not alone, and it will get better (That's what everyone tells me anyway!) -
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lol
exactly, and it shall get better.
Yeah, some parts are from personal experiences and that of my friends and family too. I do appreciate you reading my work.
Piff
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loved it i thin u as always stole the show
i rather read u right now do to me not feeling well
yo made me smile nice script
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Thank you
Hope you are getting some rest 
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Powerful write, Sis. I liked the part of being real and true love. I think that's what true love is all about, when people aren't afraid to be themselves around others. And, sometimes I think society is so fixated on changing people or thinking that they have to change their total personality for a relationship, that they can never be truly happy because wanting what love could be isn't truly love, it's just a fantasy. When a person truly loves one's self, then they can love others. Just my opinion. Anyway, wonderful write.
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Thanks lil sis
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awesome sissy, you know i be feeling this piece for sure! loved these lines:
When my heart sings a song...from miles away
you can feel my happines, this is Love.
Tasha
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Thank you sissy poo
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Liked this poem sweet write
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Thanks
Enjoy your weekend
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Melancholy..
melodies carress the heart in consolation.
A spirit flies above the mundane creatures
of this world. In search of the ecstasy that
love inspires. Oh to be loved unconditionally
without question or regrets.
A beautifully written piece that evokes
feelings of disillusionment. Like the setting
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Thanks baby
glad you enjoyed reading this and thanks for giving me your view on the contents.
E
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use it in your play
thought it was great...your good kid
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Thanks Shawn
love you uncle
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This is beautiful!!!!! sob!
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Thanks jeff
I appreciate you always.
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For A Play?
Are you screen writing for a play? I thought I understood this from the authors notes. If this is playwright material it's poppin. Go on and send Tyler perry a transcript sis-smile. I'll be in the audience snapping.
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Yeah sis, I am trying at this...
I pray that all is well you know? Thanks for giving me your imput on this, and I will keep you informed on the progress as I forward this piece along with the rest
Tyler Perry?
I wish 
I would love to work with him, honey...oh my!
Much love,
E
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I thought it was good sis. It speaks for a lot of ppl needing or wanting to be loved regardless of gender.
Keep Writing sis!
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Thanks always lil sis
Real talk here, as I will always do it from the heart.
Glad you liked it. Wish me luck.
HUGS
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