What really makes a difference
is what's inside your heart,
there you find true happiness
that's where you should start.
Just look inside yourself
and you may understand,
you can't always depend on others
to come and take your hand.
Some people love to cheer one up
and may be there for a while,
someone to talk to about your troubles
with warmth and a welcoming smile.
It's not as bad as you may think,
there are those who truly care,
here's a smile especially for you,
a smile that can spread everywhere.
A contest entry
- Happiness by Lucille.
300 points, ended March 17, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this is a simple write I must agree, but it has a sing-song flow that everyone can relate too. I like that quality.
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This is a simple write that we all need to read. We need this kind of piece from time to time as so much of what of out there is down. The scheme is good and you caught the wind as you sailed into it. You do not have much on your homepage for me to draw from to tell me anything about you. Either way I still like this piece. I noticed you clicked on "Another Load" when I spent points to feature it and did not even tell me it was horrible. I have never clicked on a piece and not responded. I'm a big boy why no review Miss True Happiness Inside? RC
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Sorry I didn't give a review. My 12 year old daughter has been using my Allpoetry username to read poems on this site. She may have read a poem of yours "Another Load." and didn't leave a comment. I'm sorry about that. Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem.
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oh this is sweet. the rhyming is cute. good luck!
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Smiles are so contageous. I like this very much. Happiness puts a smile in our souls. Very well written. Good luck in the contest.
Kelli
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