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Be With Me...

Be With Me...

 

 

I share with you in laughter.

You know Me - can you hear Me?

If you listen closely

Close your eyes

You will hear Me laughing too…

 

 

I cry when tears fall from your eyes,

And pull you close to Me.

You know I’m with you,

Right beside you,

Through all the pain you feel…

 

 

I smile when you are happy,

You can sense it if you will.

At times when blessings

Fill your life

You know I’m smiling too…

 

 

I hold your had when you’re afraid.

Can you feel it? Hold on tight.

When you feel fear

And darkness falls

I will provide your light…

 

 

Spend all of your days with Me,

Whatever they may bring.

Be with me

Throughout your life

Into eternity…

 

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  • Kooks
    May 7, 2008

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    Thank you very much for your entry. I love the idea of the monologue being from God's point of view (at least thats how i read it!) and felt you worked really hard to convey a sense of hope within the poem.

    Good luck with the contest


  • Dreanne
    March 9, 2008
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    Thanks!

    Glad you enjoyed it... It's great to have feedback as I have only just found the courage to share!

    Reviews on any of my other work would be much appreciated!


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    March 8, 2008

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    Welcome to Allpoetry, Samantha!

    A most beautiful poem of love. I really enjoyed this! Thanks so much for sharing
    Keep writing, reading and commenting.
    If you need any help here at AP please don't hesitate to contact myself or any other onlione Greeter. We are always willing to help
    Gaylene