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Lullaby

Lullaby, Lullaby,
Hush sweet child, don’t you cry.
Daddy’s gone away, he ain’t never coming back.
Momma’s still here, always near, always here.

Lullaby, Lullaby,
Hush baby angel, don’t you cry.
The darkness is a-coming, time for your dreams.
The sun is nearby, in the sky, nearby.

Lullaby, Lullaby,
Hush sweet child, don’t you cry.
Daddy’s gone away, he ain’t never coming back.
The sun is nearby, in the sky, nearby.

Lullaby, Lullaby,
Hush baby angel, don’t you cry.
The darkness is a-coming, time for your dreams,
Momma’s still here, always near, always here.

Author notes

My name is Kooks. I have manic depression. I was inspired by some music on my CD player. Lullaby.

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  • GodsTrueSoldier
    March 10, 2008

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    it's very sad, but touching, must be hard. But I did liek the poem, was a wee bit depressing but was sincere and beautiful.....and what's manic depression? is it liek polar or sutin?


  • Kelli Marie
    March 7, 2008

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    This is a very sad lullaby. I wouldn't want it sung to my child. Singing about daddy being gone and never coming back, and about coming..bed time would be better. I like the other lyrics however. Good luck in the contest.
    Kelli