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Solitude

Who would even love me
When I destroy my life?
The only friends I now have left
Is the valium and knife


I just wish to vanish
I feel the sorrow and I weep
Why can’t the pain just disappear?
I cut again; again so deep


The day I never see
My life’s an eternal night
Why won’t anybody safe me?
Help me to find the light!


I linger in the ashes
Burned an broken I wait
I’m lying in my self-made grave
Just waiting to leave this place


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  • Anemone-Rose
    March 7, 2008

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    "i linger in the ashes, Burned an broken I wait" those are my favorite lines, great poem, well done.


  • xDisasterous Angelx
    March 7, 2008
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    very powerful. i really enjoyed reading it. keep ii up.

    -amanda