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Slow Suicide

Sitting in the coner
Crying myself to sleep
Promises no one seems to keep.
Wrapped all around me
All that's left are lies in my head
Feels as though I want to be dead.
All I can do is hope and wait
The one I loved left me in this suffering state.
Broken soul, shattered heart,
For all I gave now we're apart.
Some boys can only love
But for girls love is the
Slowest form of SUICIDE.

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THIS POEM I CREATED IN ONLY 5 MIN'S
IN CLASS..

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  • grr
    November 4, 2008
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    FUCKING STEALER

    you fucking stole that from naddies vampirefreaks page
    you didnt write that in school and this is naddies best friends latoya she wrote that when she got out of holliswood , cant believe she loved a dumb bitch like you ...and she tried to protect you on top of that you just dont understand ..

    and that isnt your poem dumb ass fucking lier


  • EmmaLuLu
    April 8, 2008
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    well for a 5min job...UR THE BOMB!!!1LOVVVVVVVVVE THIS POEM.WOWplease check out mine..pliz!