Don’t close, when death
claims them with faces
grimaced like bizarre
pale kabuki masks and
humanity sinks lower.
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Words from the heart...I understand more than you can ever know.
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I like this one.... very dark!!!! J
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Wow dark! I won't ask...
Sounds like nightmares of seeing death and destruction to me, perhaps by humans lack of humanity...
Short sharp and deep!
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strange....
i have a poem titled this :/
it's diff though..very...lol
i like this poem, simple, yet complex..very intriguing!
keep it up
love
stephanie
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LOL... I'm not going to!
Okay, I lied. What the heck????
Definitely a vivid image. You had exquisite word choices. I love the streamlined style - no superfluous words.
Perfect ending line!
You are so brilliant!
But you're worrying me.
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the title flows into the opening lines and your words speak a sadness
it holds alot of meaning in it dad. I am here for you
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I like how the title flows into the opening lines. Since I wrote a poem about a departed one too yesterday I can very much associate with "the eyes of the dead don't close..."... I won't ask, just say that somehow I can associate with this lovely and somehow mysterious poem.
~ Nicolette
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I love the line don't ask! WEll you know me brother, I have too...now start explaining. lol...just kidding, its definetly different for you especially the pale kabuki masks!
~Sie
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Don't worry, I don't intend to. LOL
But I will say this really grabbed my attention. It's almost spooky even.
Great job sweetie!
Love, Cathy.
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