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Hidden Home

I’m sitting still in memory,
The only place I roam.
The long gone years are passing me
In this hidden home.

I see regrets just pass me by,
For here I am like stone.
It’s been awhile since I’ve cried,
In my hidden home.

I see you stand in my memory,
The only place you roam.
The long gone years laugh and flee,
In this hidden home.

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  • Lady Michaella
    July 14, 2008

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    Thanks for entering

    I really enjoyed reading this! It was slightly repetitive with the 'In this hidden home' and 'Roam' was there a lot, but still it was a really good poem. Thanks for entering!


  • Alice1
    March 7, 2008
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