warps in time
ripples in reality
future’s fly past
already lived
rips in moments
standing still
dimensions swirl around
side by side
cosmos in chaos
eternity slides
passing in circles
endless repeats
exploding nova
black holes created
sensations of fire
cold and icy
warps in time
ripples in reality
future’s fly past
already lived
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That's interesting. Makes me think of Star Trek and similar adventures. I am fascinated by parallel universes myself.
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Thank you so much 'judy..' for your lovely comment and applause. I am pleased you enjoyed this. I am fascinated by parallel universes, too. You should enter this contest - she is looking for people who are interested in this type of stuff. (hope to see you put in an entry!).
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I don't see the contest name anywhere.
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Quantum thoughts....
I love this! I can interpret! lol...
Write on!
*PEACE*
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Thank you so much 'islekine'! I am pleased you enjoyed this. I seem to get quite a few 'quantum thoughts'...lol...I usually just don't post them....hahaha
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this is awesome, I totally love it.. I like these new poems that you are writing. outstanding job.. wow through some of this my way, okay.. btw you are wrong your muse isn't on the ceiling of walmart.. I have been there several times this week, and never saw it once.
superb!!!
kat
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Thank you so much 'kat'...wonderful comment and clappies and hugs...lol...I am pleased that you really liked this. My muse seems to be wandering into new territory - or else she's still unwinding from Walmart...lol...(you prob. didn't see her as she is blended into the ceiling...ha, ha).
Glad you like her 'direction'.
thanks
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Fantastic piece, I love the way it comes full circle. I wonder if the universe does...? You have created awesome imagery, to me there is nothing better than a cosmic view. You have given me a beautiful one. Very well penned
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Thank you so much 'LadyD' for a wonderful comment and clappies. I am pleased that you liked this 'side-step' of mine. I don't know if the universe comes full circle or just goes forever, not ending, but it makes for interesting thoughts...lol
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You sure know how to paint the words within the cosmic
a great talent to have.
Manage to bring space to life in a unique and wonderful way.
I admire you for it
Julie
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Thank you so much 'Julie' for reading, the lovely comment and applause. I'm glad you enjoyed this. It is my lst 'cosmic' poem...lol.
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oh you did it again, the words of the past...hope for the future? good luck...
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Thank you 'Moons' for reading and the nice comment. Not sure what this is...lol...could be anything, could be nothing, could be thoughts of the insane....lol
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Hmmm this is great I love it a weird morining indeed for us thanks for sharing this with me be well much love
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Thank you Starz. I think it's the wild, wierd weather system hoovering above us here....lol
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Love the far away feeling of this! Like drifting through the cosmos...seeking answers! Wonderful write this morning...thanks for sharing!
Az
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Thank you Az for your lovely comment and applause. Guess with this pressure system on top of us this morning, my head is drifting....lol....to a warm sunny beach, or somewhere in the cosmos....ha, ha.
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if all the stars were the same difference apart from each other then what a boring sky would we have at night. Chaos is a wonderful thing. It seperates structure and disorder. It creates randomness in everything... including time......
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I agree 'Grimoire'. Thank you for reading and such a lovely comment.
Cosmic confusion to you,
and blessings
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Awesome ....you have penned a great piece here...I loved it ...
"cosmos in chaos
eternity slides
passing in circles
endless repeats"
my favourite lines
Rob
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Thanks Rob for the wonderful comment and applause. I am pleased that you liked this quick write.
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Nice one!, love the cosmos in chaos! great images throughout, great job!
Alex.
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Thank you so much Alex for the lovely comment and applause. I'm not sure what this is...lol....guess my cosmos is just in chaos this morning....lol
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