I would get angry on your behalf
if only you would let me rage,
give me that right to you, give me permission
if only you would say it's alright.
I would fight back against those who hurt you
rage against those who put you down,
who think less of you, who don't understand
if only you would let me be angry.
I would swear and kick those hurtful souls
pull their hair and break those bones.
I would cut them with my sharp ice words
if only I could let myself be free.
Author notes
I'm just angry tonight.
Please tell me what you think
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This poem has all the ingredients of a good fight. I love the sincerity behind the words. Don't mean to be picky, but if i were you, i would change those to their in the 10th line. apart from that, i really like the sting in the tail. A well set out piece with a very distinct meaning.
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I like this one alot. Great job.
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hey this is really good i have those kinds of feelings all the time no better way to let it out but to write my favorite line is "I would swear and kick those hurtful souls
pull their hair and break those bones.
I would cut them with my sharp ice words
if only I could let myself be free. " thanks for the opportunity to read it though
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I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.
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damn good expression
Very good poem. I usaully write according to my feelings to. So I suggest not reading the last few poems.
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y'know, it's interesting...this is probably one of my most popular poems in a long while...and I mean a *really* long while.
you just gotta be stern with toby. then he gives you flowers.
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sounds to me like someone hurt a friend of yours, your anger shows your love of this friend, well said...peace
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more like my frustratin at being unable to act.
glad you liked it.
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why so angry?
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just a mood I was in.
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"Angry" <- Indeed
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yep.
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