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Sigh Once More

 

 

 

 

 

 

Long and relaxed, with a

slight sensual shudder

before exhaled breath’s end

 

as passion surges wildly

like the raging waters

of a river ready to flood  

 

for I am there, eager and

waiting on the shore, ready

to be carried away…

 

in the current, that is our love.

 

 

 

 

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  • LanguishedLad
    March 9, 2008
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    well penned

    Thankyou for the entry and best of luck in the contest


  • Margaret Denham gold member
    March 8, 2008

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    The things that mean the most are often those that we wait and long for. This is true in all things but especially in personal relationships. You know my situation and how I wish I could achieve the level of closeness with my husband that you share with your wife. Maybe one day, in the meantime there are good friends to sustain my spirits.




  • tara wilson gold member
    March 7, 2008

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    this is pretty...

    and sensually gorgeous

    It is deep, too, it is that moment, I feel when we commit to someone wholly.

    I love this


  • Auburn Sunrise gold member
    March 7, 2008

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    Gorgeous!

    You took my breath away, hon.
    I love the imagery and the feeling of being flooded with love, excitement, and warmth - getting carried away in the swift currents of the moment.
    Incredible and awe-inspiring. We should all be so lucky to know this feeling.
    (P.S. you should show this to your wife)


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 7, 2008

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    oh this is such a sensual and beautiful piece the wording in this is amzing and beautiful well done daddy


  • Night Hope gold member
    March 7, 2008

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    March 7, 2008

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    *gulp*
    Wow.. that is a very sensual write my friend!!!

    Your sensual writes are always so perfect!!! I love them!
    *fans self*... is it hot in here?

    They always speak of deep sensual love and such passion that flows between lovers...

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